Bright fish swam past me, thier fins whispering around my smooth legs in the blue world under the sea. The enenemies floated back and forth in the gentle, salty curent. Salt (hidden in the cool waters that I couldn't drink) that bit my tounge. Along with the sandwich I had for lunch, that was the only thing I tasted in this silent world.
The silence was amazing. It was like seeing the world with the sound on mute. I did not hear anything. Not even a sea turtle grunt or a whale sing. There were no sirens, no angry voices, this world was hidden from violence.
It was big beautiful sea. I could not smell anything. There wasn't any polution. My nose was filled instead with cool water. I must go up for air soon, but I cannot leave this place. I love it. It has no shadows. Everything is open, for anyone to see. Everything lives in harmony. No one hurts anyone, phisiclly or emotionally. They all love and care and help one another.
My lungs are gasping for air. I must leave now. I must go back to my world of hatred and violence and hardship. But I will return, you can count that.
I silently wave goodbye to my underworld fantasy, and swim up to the sunny surface
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I Loved Your Story!! It Was Incredibly Descriptive!! I Felt Like I Was Actully There!! You Are Very good At Story Writing I See =P You Should Be A Writer When You Are Older!! Incredibly Good Job!! I Give You Like 5 Stars =P
ReplyDeletewow i love this story it5 is very descripted oh and thnxs for commenting on my blog
ReplyDelete